the cool breeze
of mountain air
and still I sit
alone by the creek
with nothing to say…
low tide
unveiling
the parts of myself
I’ve kept hidden
for so long
"A petal shower/of mountain roses/ and the sound of the rapids" -Matsuo Basho
17 Aug 2015 5 Comments
in micropoetry, Poetry, taiga, Tanka Tags: moments, mountain, nature, poetry, Reflections, shadows, taiga, tanka
Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:00:14
lovely imagery literally and metaphorically
^_^
~B
Aug 17, 2015 @ 18:00:48
Thank you so much! :)
Sep 23, 2015 @ 07:11:31
I can resonate so much with part two of this – the sea does this regularly for me too.
Sep 23, 2015 @ 07:12:30
I’m so glad! Thank you for reading.
Sep 23, 2015 @ 07:13:18
:D (Following now – love Twitter for that!)